Saturday, March 29, 2008

In Light That My Heart Is Dead Comments

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In the light that my heart is dead.

As if cold and broken
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Brandon Butler
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Korey Buffo 29 March 2008

This was REALLY pretty B :)

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Melissa Coventry 29 March 2008

This is great poem, when read out loud it rolls off the tongue and gives vivid images to the reader as to what the writers wants to remember and what they want to forget.. it's passionate and grows with intensity, until at the end a resolution is met. Lovely writing and really enjoyed. Mel xx

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