In Living Colour Poem by John Beaton

In Living Colour



In Living Colour

From parting seas, the grey's great knuckled back,
where barnacles and orange whale-lice ride,
rises like a headland, mottled hide
distressed with scar-patched scratches. The Zodiac
planes in. Its watchers gasp—the behemoth
bows to plumb the pools of aquamarine
sand, to siphon shrimp through combs of baleen;
its tail-flukes slip from boils of whorls and froth.

An orca's dorsal sets the second scene—
a whale in black and white, an exhibition
of contrasts limned in balanced composition.
Another, another, another, crumpling the green
veneer—cameras swing and click, give chase;
a sea-lion breaches, red, with half a face.

In Living Colour
Wednesday, September 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hunting,nature,sea
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There's no denying that wildlife on the Canadian Pacific coast, though beautiful, is savage. Perhaps because they're colored like pandas, orcas look friendly, but they're not called killer whales for nothing. The following poem is based on a real incident that shocked some tourists when they went whale-watching off Tofino.

The poem is a variation on the traditional sonnet form. There are fourteen five-beat lines and the rhyme-scheme is abbacddc ceecff.

The title reflects the photography theme that runs through the sestet.

This poem has appeared in a literary journal and has been anthologized.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 26 September 2018

John, such a wonderful write.................................

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John Beaton 26 September 2018

Thanks, Bernard. Much appreciated.

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