Tuesday, September 15, 2009

In Morning Light’s Glow Comments

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As from night’s rest I open my eyes,
Behold on horizon dawning sunrise.
Gazing over the lake’s rippled face,
Campfire smoke surrounds my place.
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Joseph Blitch
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Taylor Harbin 15 September 2009

I love the sound you have in this poem. It flows very well when you read it aloud. The words feel right on the tounge and flow with a sense of style. Be weary of forced rhyme. Overall it is a very good poem and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

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