Saturday, October 4, 2014

In My Home Comments

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In my home
I hear the awful news
Shooting out of aggrieved lips
Like a dozen of stray bullets
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Chinedu Dike 04 October 2014

A well articulated piece that exposes the sorrows of the bereaved over the lost of a loved one. Beautifully written with insight. Your employment of SIMILE captured the depth of the grief. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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