Sunday, July 1, 2018

In The Abyss Comments

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In the abyss, so black and bleak,
I'm swarmed with worry, worn and weak.
Peristaltic walls swallow prey:
A bolus in the bowel's bay,
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E V Wyler
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2018

A bolus in the bowel's bay amazes mind. God dwells in the places we stay and we have strong trust for getting his blessings. The rhythmic presentation with rhyme motivates readers to read this poem. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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E V Wyler 01 July 2018

Thank you! I appreciate your kind words. E. V.

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