Sunday, November 1, 2009

In The Dark Comments

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I went to the dark place
And held my red heart
In my own two hands
There, even your absence
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Nicole M. Martin
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Mrs. Blue 01 November 2009

That was beautiful. I just can't get over the whole dark thing. I love the dark especially when it's used in a poem. It just sounds so pretty. and i loved how you said 'And held my heart red heart in my own two hands'. definitley at 10

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