Conna Rice

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In The Days For Emily R - Poem by Conna Rice

In the days when i was lonely,
In the days when my heart wondered for love,
In the days when the sun burnt my joy,
In the days when the wind blew my hope,
In the days when the rain washed my desire for love.

Those days are gone, replaced by your ever presence in my life,
Today you have conquered my body and soul.

Sweet love in this day

Comments about In The Days For Emily R by Conna Rice

  • (10/2/2012 3:14:00 PM)

    It's very nice but I think that if you added a line or two saying how those days felt. In the days.... then I felt, or: I was or even I lost, something along those lines before the last three lines. It would help the flow of the poem more. Otherwise, this is very good. I like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 2, 2012

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