Tuesday, October 7, 2025

In The Stillness Of Trees Comments

Rating: 5.0

The morning unfolds
like a slow breath —
light seeps through the mist,
softly, as if asking permission.
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Laya Bajpai
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Timber Koleden 16 October 2025

A wonderfully vivid poem that places the reader right in the scene! Well done and top marks! Thank you so much for this beautiful piece!

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Isadora Quagmire 16 October 2025

A very lovely and vivid piece! ! ! Thank you for sharing : ) You illustrate the essence of a tree so well!

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Bharati Nayak 07 October 2025

So beautiful poem! Let me quote, 'I think I, too could learn from it: to hold without clinging, to bend without losing form, to let light fall through and remain whole.'

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