In This Note Poem by Jacqueline Palacio

In This Note

Rating: 5.0


In blank paper I write, I wrote down my self, my thoughts, my feelings, need your hug, need your touch, need someone to love, to love me, to miss me, to call me and say everything I need to hear, anything you shouldn't say, something they wouldn't tear, nothing you can't spell. Right or wrong, but makes me feel good, makes want you, makes me want to... Want to explode, kiss and fall, fall in your name, game of words we play, ending over the edge, crossing over the border, because we are going harder and hard we live, to be quiet, to stop your voice, listen, just listen, we're locked up, walls around us, with guns they shoot us, we're hurting, keep breathing, strong we could be and stay together, not splitting up, never separating, the pain is taken away from us, life, I wrote down in this note.

In This Note
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Wrote this 2016
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 29 November 2017

Such a fine write, Jacqueline.... a big 10++++

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