Monday, November 23, 2015

Infedility Comments

Rating: 5.0

He is laying clumsy like
A corpse.Scars are internal,
The bleeding is invisible.
He is hurt, wearing bandage of pain
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Paul Sabelo
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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 November 2015

the deceit by the beloved has inflicted a grievous injury to the heart, shattering it into pieces. The lover in distress tries to hide his feelings but can not achieve it successfully. Beautiful narration of the condition of the lover. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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