Friday, May 30, 2008

Innocence Comments

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She open the door, seeing him was no surprise
Smiling at her because they both know what awaits inside
As they walks up the stairs her heart beats faster and faster
She look back as he playfully grabs her
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Aury Cecile 30 May 2008

I love how you describe this with such feeling and power. It's a great way to show people to think before they waste their innocence. Great poem! Keep writing! Can you please read some of mine and tell me what you think? Thanks!

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