Sunday, August 5, 2012

Innocence Lost Comments

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To think back to those innocent times
Of living life with a rhythm and rhyme
Known only to you and your pure heart
Your young bright soul, so free from the dark
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Nathan Kronschnable
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Ronald 11 February 2018

To touch upon the transition from childhood innocence to adulthood (whatever adulthood is) , is very brave of you. To speak of an experience poetically is to know it comes from who you really are. I am sorry for your loss. You have done justice to the person you lost and to yourself with this poem. How sad it is that adulthood often robs us of this. This is a very meaningful and well written piece of art. Thank you for sharing it with me.

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