Thursday, June 15, 2006

Inside Comments

Rating: 4.8

If I were to be truthful
you would know that I do not simply love you
in happiness
and that I do not simply bend for you
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Danielle Nguyen
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Ben Paynter 15 June 2006

a beautiful poem, reminded me in a way of some of neruda's work, how love though it is love still posseses both hate and pride and competition. wonderful work. ben

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