She crawled inside herself today,
to see what others see.
She used to think it was outer beauty,
that others loved in me.
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A passionate instropection. With reflection comes resolution! Excellent.
The emotion drips off the page, very strong piece yet cracks of pain can been seen...wonderful poem 10 best wishes Jon
This is both a very original and innovative free style poem, Catherine, something one does not see very often. It is uniquely personal, kind of a look in the mirror from the inside out rather than from the outside in. There is both emotion and sadness in this fine poem, but also the reassurance that you soon will be a new person again. It was introspective, but not too much so, and I liked those two ending lines very much, looking to a brighter tomorrow. Carl.