Saturday, May 13, 2006

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Old Days

In your mouth
I melt
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Charles Lara
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Goldy Locks 13 May 2006

interesting point of view for this one, Charles - taking it from the coffee's perceptive. a well laid-out poem: linking ideas from past & present to draw the reader up to the spoonful in your hand.

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