broken soul.. No more

Invisible

We are always together
but you dont know me well
There's something in my heart
And its some kind of spell
Do you ever wonder
Why im always near
When she's not beside you
She's nowhere to care
I wish i could
take her place
And be the one
To put a smile on your face
But that wouldnt happen
It will never come true
because ive always been
INVISIBLE to you
When ur with each other
Everytime im around
I feel like a rock
laying on the ground
Though hurt and dying
i pretend i am fine
but if you only you
I wish you were mine

Poem Submitted: Monday, July 28, 2008

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  • Scentless Aprrentice (7/28/2008 9:58:00 AM)

    this is a wonderful poem it makes clear what you think and what you feel,

    I think you are a wonderful poet!

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  • Maria Isabel Oropeza (7/28/2008 6:54:00 AM)

    wonderful job! many individuals feel this exact same way. you have touched the hearts of many.
    Be Different. Be You.
    best of luck!
    Elizabeth

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