Is True Love Possible? Comments

Wisdom and sentiments combined to reveal not just a glance at the Holy Bible but a lot of soul studying going on. The poems I've written about the Rapture of the Redeemed believers agree that we need to be on guard as to what's going on in the world today. This applies especially now, since Israel became a nation and fulfilled many of the Last Day prophecies. In Michael's poetry, I see a lot of questions, about how we are being transformed by the renewing of our minds, capturing every thought process to create a better world beginning in our own lives. I try to keep to a rhyme structure eg 8 syllables then 6 then 8 then 6. I keep reading the draft of the poem to work out the sequence as well as the way it sounds. Writing is like learning about better ways or better compromises just to get a finished work of art. This poetry reminds me that it's sometimes a struggle to get the phrases and the phrasing to work well together, yet the sentiments expressed here are inspiring. Thank you.