Friday, March 6, 2009

It Disappeared Comments

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I was there, looking at you,
Knowing it wouldn't last long made
it so hard
It was so hard to know that the time
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Clara Diskley
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Kevin Carney 29 September 2010

I used to see the bright, burning sun shining upon me, Everything used to be so happy to me Now I look at see the dull storm approaching me The sky was gray with no color at all, I used to see the colors of the rainbow all around me. Great set of lines, great imagery you have expressed so honestly. I can relate to your poem and really nice write. Thank you for sharing.

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