It Is A Matter Of Loosing Oneself Comments

I like the way you return to poetry- it is a microcosm of life. As a good poem is written, so the good life is lived, by giving in to nature's flow: ./Let words surrender to feelings/ Without much effort/for a poem to be written./ Although we do not use /much/ effort, still we want to use some effort. This /much/ has flexible meaning. Sometimes feelings will spur us to devote hours of effort, but this is not too /much/ effort if the poem is faithful to our feelings. Beauty in the poem is proof that we followed our feelings.