Thursday, September 6, 2007

It Lies Underneath Comments

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When the best part of believe is a lie,
Nothing can be real,
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Kamei Triebell
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Solomon Senxer 22 October 2018

Great expression of experience! Thanks for sharing!

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Allieyy D 27 September 2007

I love this work! Your begginning seemed to be in what I'd call your defining style and your end was almost Dickinson-like. Keep writing! : D Oh, but, it seemed to be falling apart in the middle. I don't exactly know why, or if I'm just imagining it- can you tell me?

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Kamei Triebell

Kamei Triebell

Snellville, Georgia
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