Monday, October 31, 2016

It's 4: 20 All Of The Time Comments

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A Cloud Of Smoke That Calms My Mind
That Keeps Running Backwards Most Of The Time
Walking Down This Rocky Road Is Fine
If It's 4: 20 All Of The Time, I Can Find
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Howard Dalton
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Susan Williams 31 October 2016

Lovely rhythm, lovely rhymes and almost rhymes, and lovely choice of verbs to give this poem movement, the repetition of the title...... all equal a great poem.... or song.... I swear this poem sits there on the page singing.

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