Wednesday, April 20, 2016

It's Only You Comments

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You are the main cause of ado,
I don't know what can I do,
It's only you.
Your heart is full despise,
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Irfan Ali
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Chinedu Dike 27 April 2016

Seeming lose of fascination which disheartens a heart in bliss of love, is well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, nicely articulated in good poetic diction from inner recesses of the heart with insight. I like the rhyme Scheme of the poem. Thanks for sharing Irfan. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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