Tuesday, February 26, 2008

It's Raining Tears Comments

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I have tears in my eyes,
But you don’t see them there.
I know you don’t see them,
Because you don’t really care
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L. Racaniello 26 February 2008

I can feel your pain... but you must choose either to use punctuation or not. Your words are thrown askew without punctuation. I think you should use it. Not leaving im when it s/b I'm

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