It' S You I Want Poem by Carike Klokow

It' S You I Want

Rating: 5.0


Contaminated is my mind
with thoughts of you
what we did
and what we couldnt do

Like a summers rain you've come and gone
a quick storm causing chaos over me
for there was nothing i could have done
because i couldnt see

Blinded by your different ways
the look's you gave, the things you said
not being able to sleep for days
your face running through my head

Still hear your voice so clear
and see your eyes so blue
still feel your prescence near
and wish i could just hold you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 19 July 2006

BRAVO! You have created a few lines I wish were mine' 'Contaminated is my mind with thoughts of you what we did and what we couldn't do' Whew...I wish those were mine! LOL... VERY very nice. L

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