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It Was Just A Little While Ago

Rating: 3.1

almost dawn
blackbirds on the telephone wire
waiting
as I eat yesterday's
forgotten sandwich
at 6 a.m.
an a quiet Sunday morning.

one shoe in the corner
standing upright

the other laying on it's
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Kierstin . 11 October 2008

Wow, striking writing. I laughed at how open and honest the last bitter punch is. ~*

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Charles Guertler 24 November 2005

I fear far that far to many of us have felt this sense of worthless but are afraid to admit it. Charles wrote his feelings honestly and without forethought.

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