A Smile To Remember Poem by Charles Bukowski

A Smile To Remember

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we had goldfish and they circled around and around
in the bowl on the table near the heavy drapes
covering the picture window and
my mother, always smiling, wanting us all
to be happy, told me, 'be happy Henry! '
and she was right: it's better to be happy if you
but my father continued to beat her and me several times a week while
raging inside his 6-foot-two frame because he couldn't
understand what was attacking him from within.

my mother, poor fish,
wanting to be happy, beaten two or three times a
week, telling me to be happy: 'Henry, smile!
why don't you ever smile? '

and then she would smile, to show me how, and it was the
saddest smile I ever saw

one day the goldfish died, all five of them,
they floated on the water, on their sides, their
eyes still open,
and when my father got home he threw them to the cat
there on the kitchen floor and we watched as my mother

A Smile To Remember
Bruna Araujo 25 March 2010

How is this a poem? Oh well, maybe will never know.

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Bryan Alexander 18 September 2009

If charlie wasn't a poet then there never were any....

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Milan Kaplan 14 November 2008

I must agree with Mr Seminara: 'Poetry is defined by the poet.' Those who think that it is not a poem should perhaps make a list of features that characterise poetry. Well, what have you put down: 1. rhymes - no, modern poetry does not need rhymes since they are in the way of spontaneity and create a frame, that is, in my view, artificial. Yes, medieval, reneissance... times revelled in form and the poet was often judged by his/her ability to cram (some) meaning into various forms (sonnet, rondel etc.) of various degree of restrictions. Modernists got rid of rhymes: attempting at expressing yourself the coincidence that one word rhymes with another is hardly a sufficient reason why to put it at the end of the line. I suggest that those who require rhymes call themselves tradicionalists - I, not being one of them, will insist that it is a poem since it fits my idea of poetry that I give hereinafter. 2. Obviously there are other features intrinsic to poetry as assonance, metrical feet etc. - again the point no.1 can be applied - they are expression of form and as modern poetry sought spontaneity form became a cage they wanted to break out of. Still, the two points I mentioned contain something that is very important to poetry and that is rhythm - yes, poetry has always been expected to be more rhytmical than, say, novels or stories. And rhythm is something what I expect from poetry too - but not the artificial rhythm of forms given in advance but the rhythm of poet's thoughts. Yes, poetry has always been very subjective, it recreates the moment, as somebody put it, and therefore there is no space for explaining. The narrator (novels, stories) tends to explain more, describe - the poet relies more on you seeing the links for yourself since he/she wants to recreate the moment on the emotional, not factula, level. And so you see the way Mr Bukowski cut up his POEM into lines (sometimes just one word on the line) - yes the lines are the rhythm of his thoughts. He would not do it, if he wanted to create a short story. The lines are his decision - yes, he meant this as a poem. Try to write a short story in this way - it would annoy the reader since narration has different (intrinsic) rules and goals. What I leave out is obvious overlaying of genres - poetic features in narration, narrative features in poems - that is another, long, story. Let me repeat in the end what was said at the beginning: Poetry is defined by the poet. The poet has the right to do it while the reader has the right to say this is not poetry TO ME

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Michael Seminara 11 November 2008

Poetry is defined by the poet.

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 September 2008

I had heard a lot of things about Bukowski, but I had never really read anything he had written until I read this. Lamont is right. This is not a poem at all. What I find to be fascinating is rading all the comments by others here calling this a poem. It is hilarious. And it may be the best part about this whole thing. As for the prose piece that Bukowski actually wrote, it is absolutely wonderful prose. I love sentiment, and this piece is loaded with it. I owe this man an apology. GW62

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Laura Grimaldi 18 May 2023

Un poème, comme je les aime... qui vient du fond des tripes, qui nous donne des émotions fortes, ... moi aussi maintenant j'ai un sourire triste Charlie

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Anisha Nyambe 12 December 2022

there are two main poems; a limerick is a poem where lines 2,3 and 5 rhyme; and a free verse is a poem were the lines of the poem don't necessarily have to rhyme

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Chinedu Dike 09 January 2022

A poignant creation, very powerfully and movingly penned....

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Jayne Davies 09 January 2022

Very moving. Congratulations on POD.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 January 2022

Heart touching poem, a keen write, excellent and brilliant. Congrats being chosen as the Modern Poem Of The Day

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