It Was Too Good Poem by Sham Khan

It Was Too Good

Rating: 3.8


The shiny gem
I saw in my dark days
spread light in my life
without letting me know
that was too good not to notice.

I was in cloud nine
I kept flying with that
I saw the most beautiful things
in the place i thought the worst
I was too busy to think about
the consequences.

It was not my fault
it was too simple to think about
the complexities
Everybody forget that
gem can not always be good
if they eat it
it'll kill them
and everybody forget that
the higher they fly
the lower they fall

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

You are capable of seeing the silver lining in every cloud of reality.Very good poem deep and very inspiring--I gave you ten....please keep writing poetry....Namaste...

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I like the second verse very well... I love the feelings expressed in this poem great work....

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