Its Just So Typical... Poem by LOST PRINCESS

Its Just So Typical...



you looked into my eyes and
i stared back into yours
your one of the typical guys
that will only tell me lies.
you seemed so distant when
i tried to be close
and then you went and got
HER
you told me constantly that
you love me
but it turned out like a typical relationship
like a rose that grows and blooms and is beautiful but then eventually shrivels into a crisp and brittle mass
you were wrong
you didnt love me
you cannot love at all.
so i sit here up against the wall
crying my eyes out
cuz of your typical guy lie.
you said you loved me!
it shouldnt be a lie.
love is like a fire
when you play with it too much and finally get burned.
but my heart is getting burned as you

feed
the
fire

with all the typical guy lies
its just enough and i cant take it anymore.
just step across the threshold and stroll out that door.
like nothing ever happened and i was OBLIVIOUS
to what you were going and doing behind my back
it hurts and i want to hurt you back.
it doesnt seem right but it doesnt seem wrong.
as you sit and you sing your typical love song.
your just another chapter that leads to the end
and the rose that shrivels and floats around the bend
drowning in the river of your typical guy lies.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Mccudden 13 February 2009

typical guys well untill she finds the right one. nice write good structure throughout clean poem leads you through it well easy to understand well done on this one its a 10 from me

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Sydne Morris 13 February 2009

awesome rhyme scheme! The pain and sorrow of a broken heart is beautifully portrayed in this poem....bravo: P

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