Monday, May 29, 2006

Jackpot Comments

Rating: 5.0

Waiting for the slots to roll
in my favor
I place another dollar
and a second
...
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Charles Lara
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Nick Percowycz 29 May 2006

Waitresses always make me lose concentration! There is too much dreaming when they come around. Excellent poem Charles, which can only get a ten!

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Stanley Cooper 29 May 2006

Charles...being a Las Vegan, I really appreciated your 'Jackpot' poem... You've hit the nail on the head...folks keep on putting coins into those machines, just waiting for the waitresses to return

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