Thursday, October 8, 2015

Jadoo Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sochta hu baith k akelepan me...
Bin kahe kisise bs man hi man me..
akhir tum aise kyaa ho
Jo tum bin kuch nhi..
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Mandeep Chahal
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Abduhoo Salamath 21 August 2016

Sochta hu baith k akelepan me... Bin kahe kisise bs man hi man me.. akhir tum aise kyaa ho Jo tum bin kuch nhi.. Aur agar sab kuch hi tum ho.. waah...vaqiyee aap ke kalam me bhi jadoo hai..

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Rajnish Manga 08 October 2015

From line one to the last it appears to be the recital of some Sufi poet with the exception of the following line 'Ho mahaz khayalon ki rani tum koi haqiqat nhi..' Beautiful wording that suits the imagery and the narrative. Thank you, dear Mandeep.

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