Sunday, June 12, 2011

Jealous Comments

Rating: 5.0

The little green monster,
Sat on my shoulder,
Watching in angst,
As my peers get bolder.
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Zoe Adams
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Adeline Foster 24 January 2012

Very good poem, well thought out. Your attention to spelling and structure is so refreshing and evidence of many enjoyable poems ahead. Read mine - A Writers Dilemma – Adeline

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Sarah Lord 15 June 2011

hey, Zoe told you i would join ;) anyway love all your stuff like always: D

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