Friday, May 19, 2006

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as you sang i stared up into your closed eyes
wondering about the man who laid behind them
the man whos soulful voice rose up from its haggard home
and soared accross the room to find rest in my hungry heart.
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Lily Faust
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Brian Dorn 19 May 2006

Lily, I think 'John' would find your poem beautiful... wonderfully written! Brian

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