Johnny Cash Looking At Daddy Comments

Hey Thanks, there isn't much structure in my story. I'll explain I watched Johnny Cash 'walk the line' yesterday. The scene where he is sitting at the dinner table with his Ol Man and family. You can tell Johnny is a mess from his dad and longs for attention. Johnny is sort of lost in this world and hardened from his choices But gets a grip on life and comes back to Folsom prison! I feel like this man and suppose my poem is deeper than the eye. Grit for me means GOD and I learned love triumphs evil.