Join The Circus Poem by I.V 94s

Join The Circus



Confusion like the clown climbing
to reach the fun
Children laughing
because of pity

Come and join the circus
Travel around
Not thinking
about the consequences
that follows

Live in the bubble
that will eventually
explode
And
it will not
be pretty

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kamil Michnicki 04 May 2009

It's a good concept for a poem. I didn't like the last few lines. Actually I think I really like the first two lines of the first two stanzas and the first 3 lines of the last stanza. It would actually be a good poem with just those lines.

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