Junkyard Kingdom Comments

two women? Your shark tooth dangled into your black corset and I waited in my boots and torn mini skirt marriage to the lonely earth...i wondered what this means. hmm? like me, you capitalize and punctuate as in prose. it threw me in one place. that's when i realized what you were doing..like me. i did not get a sense of junkyard from the poem. i just thought there was an abandoned, ravaged car. i scored it very good. thanks for sharing. :)