Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Just A Dream I Saw In The Wind Comments

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Listen to the song of a far away sky,
swishing through the clouds as we make them cry,
raining all over the lakes below,
freezing and quickly turning to snow,
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Josef Erlebach
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Indira Renganathan 06 February 2010

The title is good...half of the content is very interestingly descriptive...finishing lines...very contradictory out of a depressed mood...well penned...thank you

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Josef Erlebach

Josef Erlebach

Brunswick, ME
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