Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Just A Plain Surface Comments

Rating: 5.0

little talks
long silences
from inside is heard
a sudden scream
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indira babbellapati
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Ranjit Ravindran 13 October 2009

Another masterpiece and an excellent showpiece. I am always a victim of this 'plain surface syndrome' you have marvelously presented. The phoenix in me has resurrected over a billion forms and I can assure you that each one of them went unnoticed! Hope your effort will help our loved ones to spot the phoenix from now on. I must thank you for this... A LOUD RESOUNDING 'THANK YOU.' And a sweet 10.

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Rakesh Bedi 29 September 2009

The surface ought to remain plain till the time poet decides otherwise.....of no difference to anyone but the sufferer.....the wearer knows where the shoe pinches..(osho) .....

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