Sunday, January 27, 2019

Just Being Kids Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking through the day
You and I holding hands
Doing the best we can
In trying to understand
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Ray Hansell
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Practicing Poetess 27 January 2019

I love this poem very much. There is something to be said for the freshness and innocence of youth, when everything is pure and sincere and uncomplicated. When people genuinely appreciate each other, instead of using each other. A sweet poem of bygone days, evoking pleasant memories! Very well-written.

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