Thursday, June 7, 2012

Just Like A Dream Comments

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I feel the sand as it rolls around in my toes
The wind as it makes the smallest knots in my hair
I smell the salty mist rise from the ocean as it finally reaches my nose
It all feels like a dream, doesn't it?
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Sweet Serendipity
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Saadat Tahir 08 June 2012

the mingling and meshing of dreamland and cold reality done very well... makes a lot of sense nice cheers

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R.k Das 07 June 2012

a very beautiful poem, , where reality and dream are so effectively juxtaposed, , , the mundane and material end up in spiritual[[paradise]] thanx

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