Sunday, August 14, 2016

Just Like A Dream. Comments

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Didn't last long those sweet days;
Went away fast and didn't stay.
Those sweet days when we were together;
Where we went the birds used to gather.
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Honny Zubedi
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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 14 August 2016

When we talked of love, Time used to stop; Birds used to watch, And leaves used to drop - I loved these lines. Thank you for sharing

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Govind Ramakrishnan 14 August 2016

Lovely poem. Written from the heart and with love. Great work!

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Honny Zubedi

Honny Zubedi

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