Kalashnikov Comments

A fairly simple grammatic structure, but really quite an elegant flow. I actually found this looking for some of Kalashnikov's own poetry, but I can't read this and not give you a compliment. You've made a nice, brief piece, which is still powerfully evocative. And I can't help but draw a parallel between the structure of this writing and the design of the AK47, in that it is no more complex than it needs to be. Just like the rifle does it's job of taking lives, you have done the poet's job of communicating an idea. Spectacular work, I think I'm going to look for more of your stuff.