Killing After Anger Poem by Matthew Cole

Killing After Anger



Build me up

Tear me down

Say you love me

Think I cheat on you... F*** NO! ! !

I wanted to marry you

I saw something in you

I still do

I love you

Truly I still do

But I hope this guy was worth it

Now I'm pissed

Honestly if killing wern't illegal

WTF! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jan Fuentez 03 December 2008

Like everybody else here, stay calm and it's good you have 'written' your anger. Life is not a bed of roses all the time, sometimes we have to undergo pain in order to achieve something more meaningful. Like your style, keep it up.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

An outburst of love failure...........a disease.........like a heart failure.Kool piece Matthew.

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wow...does that make you even more angry or does it calm you down to write about this......to me its good for someone that would like to releive pain and be calm but yeah im not going to judge what other people kno cuz its not my place, but keep writing.

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First place calm down. take a couple of deep breaths and hug yourself and say to yourself I love me. Life is full of disappointments that we learn to survive and life is full of happy moments that we learn to relive and hang on to.You are very young and I know what it is like to be betrayed but you have many good years ahead of you and when God closes a window another one opens.Somethings are not meant to be-but there is always something better ahead of you.God bless you and thank you for serving our country.

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wow hun...i feel the anger...plz keep writing...u got friends here for u if u ever need anything...

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