Kiss Poem by shafeeqrahman rahman

Kiss

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They kiss shamelessly
under the sun.
they kiss endlessly
for having fun.

They gathered in public
expressing their right
and spread panic
thinking they are right.

their nerves of shame
have chopped and marred
and vanes of fame
have shivered and iced

shame on them
shame on them

Sunday, January 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Kiss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
being excited in the shameful protest kiss of love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 August 2017

their nerves of shame have chopped and marred why is kiss a sin? here in europe all kiss publically expressing their love or fun ror just. no one questions them.. in public gardens yongsters go naked here. not even police questions it. ok thank you dear poet. for this poem.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 09 February 2015

Surely it is a blot and shame.nice writing.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 February 2015

A good social message on propriety in public places pertains in this poem. Likes.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 February 2015

A good social message on propriety in public places pertains in this poem. Likes.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 February 2015

A good social message on propriety in public places pertains in this poem. Likes.

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