Friday, October 13, 2006

Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cruising for a smile
With her knowing look,
She sees my flirty eyes,
Impenetrable and delicious.
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Melvina Germain 14 October 2006

This poem definitely has a romantic flare to it. I like it, good one--Melvina--

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Jon Butter 13 October 2006

What is the action behind this poem? I'd love to know what it evokes for you.

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