Wednesday, January 2, 2008

Knobbed Knees Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky is monotone and it speaks
In a straight forward tone
The sunny people’s frowns
Are hiked up at the corners
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okeydokey #3 13 January 2008

have not...we all been here...this is a witty...and abstract delicacy...an immediate 10...good job...

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John Nightingale 02 January 2008

Thought provoking. Gives a feeling like the protagonist has been left behind due to age or disability. Thanks.

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