L.A. Is Burning Comments

Poetry Hound: 'Gnawing inside us' that would include me. Sorry you didn't like it. Plus, I meant for the piece to be distatched. The horrible shock of it. Thanks for your comment. I could not find your poetry here? ?

What I don't like about this piece is that you don't seem very emotionally involved. You're just narrating what happened on TV. Even more unfortunately, your comment about hate is just a safe blanket statement. You don't say if some of that hate is within you or not.

I read about this i find this sort of thing hard to believe, it makes me sad to think we as human beings treat each other like this, i find it hard to write about this sort of thing because i dont understand it For you it is a way of ridding yourself these terrible events and those demons that disturb the human mind, if you want email me talk about it i am only to glad to listen Warm regards allan