Lady Comments

Wow! I could actually see the rapist saying this. It is written in a song like way that makes it feel fast, like the rapist is trying to do the rape quick and yet at the same time, take his time with pleasure. Lovely.

I like the use of form here...it works well, and a poem about rape, something so closely related to control, it's a good choice to use form. Although it's pretty disturbing, it's also really beautiful.