Friday, July 7, 2006

Land Of Shadows Comments

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It is the land of nothing, ‘cept Godly whites.
The land of magic; the Northern Lights.
It is the land of mystery, and inspires awe.
The land in which there is no flaw.
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Brian Dorn 07 July 2006

Dan, sounds like a winter wonderland... great style and use of frigid images. Awesome write! ! Brian

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Jack Dylan 07 July 2006

Beatifully written with a great flow and imigary. Obviously this is not your first rodeo, hehe! Great poem. If you are referring to Alaska however, I see a few flaws in the the flawlessness of the people 'not affected by rot' Anyway still a greatly written poem, I look forward to more of your work.

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Dan Brown

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