Thursday, April 26, 2007

Last Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now I was minding my own particular business
When this stranger put his eyes on me...
I says, 'cool it fellow because I'm not free! '
'That's my man leaning in the corner and looking mean,
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Iris Washington 27 April 2007

I loved your poem, so real, so natural, so true. Can't tell you how many times that happens. You are the most talented poet I know.

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Jack Tex 26 April 2007

I loved your poem very much, the thing is it's so authentic, so natural that anyone could identify with that. It's really amazing how you manage to say a miserable memory in a poetic language so great. You are blessed with what they call 'literary talent'.

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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