Last Day Poem by brittney brooke

Last Day



i sit here,
as i hear the cheers.
the seniors screaming,
cause it is their last year.
the students are marching,
the drums are sounding.
bells are ringing,
and seniors are screaming.
glitter and paper,
going everywhere.
to annoy the teachers,
was the dare.
out in the parking lot,
tires are screeching.
radfios blasting,
and students are cheering.
they have made it,
the year is over.
they did their best.
and now they are graduating.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zac Wilson 12 December 2009

You could use some work on your line lengths, which comes with practice. But, other than that, good job.

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